Profoundness (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Profoundness (Haiku)

Rating: 4.7


the sun is sinking
into the sea—my sad heart
retreats in its depths

Saturday, April 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sunset,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 20 January 2018

Another great short diamond!

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Unwritten Soul 01 May 2017

Wow...i love the beauty of this haiku..so profound...10 for you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2017

A very beautiful expression of sadness is interestingly expressed here with observation of sunset. Heart retreats in its depths entirely amazes mind here. A nice poem is shared with great imagery....10

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 April 2017

An impressive haiku. Thanks

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