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Prom! $e Of Love

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It's so hard to believe that he's gone,
everything seems a blur, so wrong.
You sit there and stare at your ring,
this couldn't be happening, not him.
You feel all drained and all alone,
You hate to go to the place you once called home.
As you sit and clutch tightly to his clothes,
you remember all his promises, his vows.
He's so far away yet so near,
he's always there to wipe away your every tear.
As you stare at the bed where he layed,
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Braja K Sarkar 05 December 2011
Full of sweet thoughts of love.nicely expressed in this poem..I think only a true lover can tell this way..Thanks Tanvi...
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Shekhar Joshi 23 January 2010
beautifully written....this was ur best for me till now.......maybe coz i have written something close to it...... liked it anyways............... ;) hey y dont u look up at mine(the similar themed one) ......namely 'forever remains......'
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Darlene Styles 22 January 2010
very deep. i like it
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anurag duggal 22 January 2010
we should not obsess about whats gone....life is to live not brood so live it gal
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i like this poem, good job :) ! ! ! !
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Joseph Poewhit 21 January 2010
Words have a real togetherness.
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Rajaram Ramachandran 19 January 2010
A lovely love poem from a teen aged.
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dance angel 19 January 2010
this is so great very good indeed
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Tom Golding 19 January 2010
Emotive and touching. Watch the tenses and grammer though when rhyming the end of a line.
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Fay Slimm 19 January 2010
An emotive sharing of loss - - and with a tender undercurrent you have succeeded in appeal to the reader.... well written. 10 from Fay.
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