Zachary Clark

Rookie (3/3/1993 / Edmond Washington)

Promise Me One Thing. - Poem by Zachary Clark

There was this girl,
We'd been friends for awhile,
A long while.

She looked upset, distant,
I asked her what was wrong,
She was silent

I asked her if I could help,
I asked her if she cared,
She was stubborn

I asked her if she loved me,
I asked her if she wanted to kiss me,
Her lips barely quivered

As I said, 'Well then I'll be off, '
She touched my wrist,
I stood still as a statue

She pulled soft on my arm,
I turned around,
She was there

On her tippy toes,
She then lightly, gently,
Slowly kissed me

She then said,
Barely a whisper,
'What is wrong is,
I love you

How can you help me
Is by holding me close,
Never letting go

Do I care,
I only care for you,
You alone

Do I love you,
That is why I am
forever scared

Do I want to kiss you,
Everyday there is a rising sun
Running across the darkness
bringing a new dawn
the coming of a new day

I want to kiss you

Every time I see a couple
Holding each other
Close, giggling

I want to kiss you

Every time I see my Mom and Dad
Watching them express
the the love they have
for each other

I want to kiss you

Every time I see kitten
Stretching, sprawled
Cute, innocent on the floor

I want to kiss you

Every time you say, 'Hi' to me
I turn my head to blush and think

I want to kiss you

Every time you say
Your my friend forever

I want to kiss you.

That is what is wrong that is
why I must ask you one thing'

I was curious,
I also asked slowly,
'What would that be? '

She says not more
than seven words,

'Promise me,
You'll always love me,

'I promise,
For I have ALWAYS,
Wanted to kiss you.'

Comments about Promise Me One Thing. by Zachary Clark

  • Bharati Nayak (8/29/2015 9:32:00 PM)

    Wondering at one's feeling of love, is it right or wrong is what what constitute a teenager's experience after blooming signs of love.The poem nicely portrays the hesitation, and resistance that come at this stage even if he or she feels overwhelmed by the surge of emotions. (Report) Reply

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  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (8/29/2015 4:05:00 PM)

    Wonderful expression of love with whisper of words in every line makes this poem entirely fantastic and really an interesting poem of the day. Congrats for being selected for this. Amazing sharing....10 (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2015 10:23:00 AM)

    Its was awesome if it his goal to was to be romantic (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (8/29/2015 3:15:00 AM)

    Yes, without lasting love there is no security for a lady. Only when the promise is kept up there will union between them ever! (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (8/29/2015 2:36:00 AM)

    Very nice. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (8/29/2015 12:35:00 AM)

    Simply amazing! Great poem! (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2009 9:38:00 PM)

    thats good poem...

    i loveeeee it lol

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  • (9/21/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    Very well done Zach. An ode to love's beginning.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (9/20/2009 7:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful engaging poem with the desire to hold one special at the same time being scared of losing the most imp being...Winnie (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (9/20/2009 4:40:00 PM)

    She then said,
    Barely a whisper,
    'What is wrong is,
    I love you...............................wonderful story of love conquered, joy redounds toheart, yet evocative and passionate by ingenuity,10+++, thanks for sharing
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  • (9/20/2009 8:55:00 AM)

    this poem is wonderfull! it is really very touching...10 (Report) Reply

  • (9/19/2009 11:40:00 PM)

    what a cute poem.. yes, we are both young and there are a lot space for improvement in our style of writing.. I think we both love what we do and that love create a wonderful poem like this.. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (9/18/2009 11:37:00 PM)

    Dear Zachary, feelings are feelings, we all express them in different ways, nevertheless, we express them all, and you are no alone, it is a long journey and you made your first step, keep it up, please, check my site and you that I am telling you the truth, great work, you got my vote, Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

  • Rajkumar Mukherjee (9/18/2009 11:15:00 PM)

    Dear Zachary,
    Liked the poem, simple flow, earnest expression of love of an adolescent in no unambigous terms.I'm giving you 10. I hope you'll improve with your age with rhythm and style..Remember in love less said is always better, so is in poems. Let the reader ponder about it.
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  • (9/18/2009 11:12:00 PM)

    Yea, i had read this like an hour ago, but it wouldnt let me comment
    Now it is Yay:
    Beautiful poem, well written out, and very creative
    Sadly as in your biography it says its not a firsthand situation
    but its stil good
    Imagination will take you a long way
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  • (9/18/2009 11:10:00 PM)

    dang dude.....this is awesome. (Report) Reply

  • (9/18/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    What lovely and sweet poem
    wow fanastic job
    I luv line Promise me
    You always luv me
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  • (9/18/2009 10:58:00 PM)

    WOW! ! ! A precise and clear thoughts, well narrated story telling of love and the yearning of kisses..........lovely! 10++++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, March 8, 2010

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