***promises*** Poem by mimzy sue
***promises***
We made a promised
To hold, to love forever
To be there for each other
You whispered and
Said, you have a dream
Holding my hands
Walking down along the Road
Far, Far, away we go
Where no one can hurt us
Where there are no boundaries
For Love
For everything
When I looked
Those big innocent eyes
My heart Ached
Darling, Ours is not a fairyland
Where dreams come true
But you believed and
Clung to those little,
Sweet promises we made
No googbye's,
Never to depart,
But deep down inside your heart
You know that
You belong to a far, far away land.....
And you have to go back someday
If only,
Your dreams come true....
do dreams come true..i wonder... another beautiful write ma'am, you've good talent to make readers to feel the words of your poem...keep writting and sharing 10 rgds asif
This poem is beautifully written. Romantic poem with deep emotion. I like it. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
so truly sweet and romantic with deep emotional content. thanks, melvin
i love it...very sweet.....and it expressed great /true feelings...this is my kind of poetry....where feelings are being expressed freely...Keep it up...my 10 for you...
This is a beautiful romantic poem, Soft sensual read. Lovely! ; D
Mimzy, you have expressed your feelings beautifully and innocently. May yours and your loved one's dreams come true...Naseer
Another fine exhibit of your ability to tug at the Reader's heartstrings...through, tightly wound stanzaec architecting, and stellar use of contemporary free-style verse...(1st stanza/1st line...promised, should be promise, as you are employing this word as a noun...not an verb or adverb) Otherwise...very well done, indeed, young lady, as usual! *F j R*
The emotion of this poem is very true, you express some feelings about love, thank you for sharing it with me!
Thank you for pointing me to this.You have a way with words that make eyes and heart both read your work.Kev
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 9:03:11 PM # 1.0.0
Yes, you are really doing well with the style of your poems.Do keep it up and, keep on writing.Thank you.Bye. Edward Kofi Louis