mimzy sue


Forgive Me, My Angel - Poem by mimzy sue

Forgive me if i look at you and i'll lose my mind
Forgive me if i write a song for you
Forgive me if i count the stars at night and think about you
Forgive me if i wish that you'd be here with me
Forgive me if i miss you too much
Forgive me if i tell the whole world that I'm inlove with you
Forgive me if i bring basket of flowers for you
Forgive me if i see you in my dreams every night
Forgive me if i ask God to take care of you
Forgive me if i dont deserve you
Cos my love, you are an angel!
And i'm just a human being
Forgive me if i say 'Goodbye, my angel'


Comments about Forgive Me, My Angel by mimzy sue

  • Antonio Liao (11/3/2008 6:36:00 PM)

    thats a very honest poem.... the wisdom behind the poet.... tells that life is not alone to live..... your such a very nice person.... it is reflected in your poem.... thank you my friend.... i love to read again and again your poem... God bless
    and good day
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  • Alexandra GrayAlexandra Gray (11/2/2008 4:31:00 AM)

    Just wonderful, wonderful poem.I guess you don't have to be sorry, you just can't help it if your in love :) (Report)Reply

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  • Alison Cassidy (10/25/2008 8:40:00 PM)

    This wistful poem reminds me of Juliet's famous line: 'Parting is such sweet sorrow that I shall say goodbye till it be morrow.' You have a sweet, romantic heart that deserves to be embraced by her AnGel. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report)Reply

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  • Jerry Hughes (10/24/2008 6:14:00 PM)

    You're much more than 'just a human being' Mary, you're a compassionate, caring person and it's evident in your writing... (Report)Reply

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  • Angeline Snowboy (10/19/2008 4:21:00 AM)

    nicely written! =D
    love ur poems!
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  • Ivor Hogg (10/9/2008 10:01:00 AM)

    Liked the sentiment but found the repetition a bit too much (Report)Reply

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  • Howard Johnson (10/9/2008 9:23:00 AM)

    A nice piece, enjoyed every word, Mimzy, thank you for sharing, (Report)Reply

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  • ♥ Brie {And Eric} ♥ (10/9/2008 9:03:00 AM)

    9
    Like it
    Very Beautiful
    Your a very good poet
    keep writing
    -Brie
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  • Shimon Weinroth (10/9/2008 4:55:00 AM)

    well said nice poem
    cheers
    Shimon
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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALEPERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (10/9/2008 3:44:00 AM)

    a touching poem thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (10/8/2008 11:51:00 PM)

    love still intense betiding by the gleams of beauty
    forgiveness pledges to the time and space by redemption.............wonderful expression of love by imagery, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing
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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/7/2008 8:19:00 AM)

    oh mimzy
    tell me
    between love
    and he
    what's in the middle?
    your lovely poetry..............
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  • Mehedi Faysal (10/5/2008 2:05:00 PM)

    great poem...so bold words..carry on...'mimzy sue' 10for it (Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/5/2008 12:25:00 PM)

    wow.......very nice indeed (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 4, 2008



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