mimzy sue


*just A Little Mistake, Daddy* - Poem by mimzy sue

He was the best human being i've ever known,
He was as gentle as a lamb
He loved me more than anybody could've
But he made me cry

I was his little princess
I still would've..........
If he had'nt left me
I cried the whole night you left me daddy

I used to wonder if i was the reason
Or was it because of mommy? ?
This I would never know.......
I wish i 'd find out someday....

Or Is she better than us? ? ?
Did she love you more than we do?
I longed for you every single day,
Wishing that you'd come back..

I saw there lying on his death bed
I wished to hugg him
But he had another princess
My heart bled and broken into pieces..

I saw regret in his eyes
Tears were falling on his cheek
It was too damn late to turn back
He died a broken Heart......

'Just a little mistake, daddy'


Comments about *just A Little Mistake, Daddy* by mimzy sue

  • O Anna Niemus (1/9/2009 7:56:00 AM)

    God forgive us all who have in so many ways shattered the lives of others
    .. Father forgive us for we knew not what we did
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Reetessh Sabrr (11/6/2008 3:14:00 AM)

    can relate with u dear...only the poet can create the magic of of even grief.
    10+
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Emily OldhamEmily Oldham (10/31/2008 4:55:00 AM)

    so sad... but a really great poem... (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Shimon Weinroth (10/25/2008 2:45:00 AM)

    beware of the Electra Syndrome, the tribute has many mixed emotions and is well presented,10 what about more poems
    cheers
    Shimon
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Jerry Hughes (10/24/2008 6:06:00 PM)

    Never regret the love you had for your father Mary, regardless of the circumstances I'm certain he loved you just as much. Why wouldn't he? (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Alison Cassidy (10/23/2008 8:05:00 PM)

    Compassion pours from every line of this tender-hearted poem about the tragic consequences of family breakdown. Let us hope that this honest and impassioned expression of your feelings of loss and betrayal may enable you to begin the long road to acceptance and forgiveness. I used to tell my kids that there's always enough love to go round, because as the family grows, so does the love, like Adam Lindsay's Magic Puddin'. I'm sure your Daddy adored his little girl to the end. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Angeline Snowboy (10/19/2008 4:24:00 AM)

    aww
    it made me cry!
    very good written!
    best wishes =)
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Reshma Ramesh (10/9/2008 11:41:00 PM)

    aweeeeeeeeeee so sad........well written (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Ivor Hogg (10/9/2008 10:03:00 AM)

    Unanswerable questions posed in poetic prose. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Asif AndalibAsif Andalib (10/9/2008 9:44:00 AM)

    A piece of pathetic practical experience described in so beautiful manner! It deserves 10. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • ♥ Brie {And Eric} ♥ (10/9/2008 9:05:00 AM)

    10
    Put together very well
    Similar experience excpt with my mom
    Know your pain
    -Brie
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Yaseen Anwer (10/9/2008 8:20:00 AM)

    Very fine contruction
    Deserve 10 on 10
    Keep going.....
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (10/9/2008 5:07:00 AM)

    a touching verses concept..a wonderful tribute to a father..

    Ency Bearis
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Shimon Weinroth (10/9/2008 4:51:00 AM)

    poignant longing and tender emotions
    you have some minor grammatical mistakes when you correct them i will rate this lovely poem
    cheers
    shimon
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Harish K. Thakur (10/9/2008 12:52:00 AM)

    A heart rendering composition from a young girl who has suffered more than a normal being. The piousness of the love for dad and the sullen departing has been traced so lucidly and artistically that it raises the piece into greater heights..Well done (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/9/2008 12:32:00 AM)

    Im so sorry Mimzy.Dad's were tempted to the beauty of love but he overlooked the eternal love to a child! (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (10/9/2008 12:07:00 AM)

    daddy knows the depth of love by the daugter
    but too much painful by the reeks of darkened shadow.........wonderful tribute a father, ruefully poignant, tears gleans in the eyes by trembling heart, hurtful sorrow, yet tears falls by the lucid flow racking the whole being, wrought ingenious,10+, thanks for sharing
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 17 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 9, 2008


[Report Error]