Monday, November 2, 2009

Protestation. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now deaf from bad memory's fearful sounds,
Unyielding nightmares mean pressure abounds.
Re-living, over and over again.
What has awful warfare done to our men?
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Gibson 03 November 2009

Men and woman are sent to war albeit! that's what they signed up for they little know the pain they'll face, killing a member of the human race a blown off a limb, or left to die, a body bag, as mothers cry life will never be the same, Its politicians that's to blame

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Georgia Girl 03 November 2009

I absolutely agree...there MUST be some other way to resolve issues, if there ARE issues...10

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Gordon Wilkinson 03 November 2009

What exactly - sad to see so many in the bloom of life plucked away like flowers on their wreaths - 10

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Catrina Heart 02 November 2009

A grandeous ending said....well done! ! ! 10++++++++

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Carol Gall 02 November 2009

i wish someone knew an answer 10

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Yassar Ali 02 November 2009

Beautiful poem with a great meaning and point

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Daniel Kempson 02 November 2009

Blades of grass forgotten 10 Daniel

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 02 November 2009

A question many have asked Fay... Andy 10

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David Harris 02 November 2009

Fay, you pose a very good question there, what are they fighting and dying for. It does make you wonder sometimes. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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