From: Sadiqullah Khan
To: Nivedita Bagchi
Date-Time: 12/23/2009 4: 47: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: A Nobel Prize
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See my poem, A Nobel Prize. I have included ur poem there. Is it ok?
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To Poet Sadiqullah Khan:
By love you’ve embosomed my poem…
On the eve of New Year Poet niv
‘Crowning’ your poetic affections
Regards for the honor,
In Ever Poetic Tieship.
niv
31 December,2009.
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Sadiqullah Khan (12/23/2009 4: 30: 00 AM)
A Nobel Prize
I
As on today
24 Dec,2500 BC
Being the head
Of the committee
Where a beautiful poem
PSYCHOSOMATIC LIGERIE
By MS. NIVEDETA BAGCHI SPC.UK.
Has been submitted
For review
And I hereby
Bestow upon her
And she is
Very kind
To accept
A NOBEL PRIZE
For the reasons
That she has written
Pure and sensible
Human emotions
And feelings
Applause
Congrats
........
24/12/2009
~ PSYCHOSOMATIC LINGERIE ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
24 December,2009.
Its scare
And rare
To get
Privacy
Intimacy.
Don’t care
I do dare
To bare
Psychosomatic
Lingerie
In poetry
Else are
Scary
Parry
Fury
Lurid hungry.
Ms. Nivedita
A wee lory
The Poetry
Her emotional
Sanctuary.
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Sent to Noble Prize conferring committee:
[In Best Poem category for the year 2500 BC ~ niv ~ LOL! ! ]
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Amazed by Poets' interpersonal relation and interaction… No envy…no rat race…no blaspheme.....just read and enjoy… Both Poets are with open stream-lined without any twirl eddies in psyche…/ heart Hats off to both poets…cheers
i wish you all the best in your work...you are indeed a poet willing to chalenge the world using your wit, humor, and knowledge of the craft. congratulations
I wish you many more awards for your contributions like this to the poetry world.
I sincerely congratulate 1st to Poet Sadiqullah Khan [PSK] for ‘embosoming’ this poem and writing a poem on it… 2ndly I congratulate Poet Ms. Nivedita for ‘crowning’ poem [A Nobel Prize] of PSK 3rdly PSK again wrote a poem titled as My New Year Bouquet… Excellent fellow feelings and congrats to both the poets. AB London Copy to PSK
Bold and precise. A wonderful interaction of two poets. Well done, lovely! A crown for both! ; D
neat-precise-hits the nails where it hurts and words make all the sound defintely 10++++++
As usual a bold poetry To bare/Psychosomatic/Lingerie/In poetry/Else are Scary/Parry /Fury…’ sarcastically rhymed ‘The Poetry /Her emotional /Sanctuary. ‘…and so indeed for a committed and confirmed poet. 10++ Dr. V.
‘I do dare/To bare/Psychosomatic/Lingerie/In poetry’ Thumbs up to your poetic venture… Tried to stay nude and truthful to your emotion … No concoction pretension and reservation…that’s the spirit As reader I whole heartedly support it. Nice reading experience. 10+
‘…Ms. Nivedita/A wee lorry/The Poetry /Her emotional /Sanctuary.’ Yeah you’re Lory [Australasian parrots having a brush-tipped tongue for feeding on nectar]… But origin is India…the country of oldest wisdom and ageless culture Reflected in her refuse in Poetry-Sanctuary the most coveted place To be feed on nectar the aesthetic fluid for every poet.9 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Pure and sensible Human emotions And feelings Applause Congrats wonderful abstract poem, powerful ideas to convey the message 10++++++++++++