~ Rape Ride Gizmo @ $ 2 ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

That was a very sharply expressed poem which engaged me with the pain and really made me feel sick (in a good way) . This vial act of specific (or any) violence toward women is horrible and your poem Ms Nivedita conspicuously dictates the pain that women feel. Impressive write, sublime, keep penning. :)

I liked it. Unusual to the extreme which is always okay with me. Yes, I liked it. S.

you paint landscapes with your words. it seems every line was clawing back with emotion. truly unique stuff.

Well it is very well described in an appropriate manner and very well put together, although I was a little intrigued of how it doesn't quite rhyme yet goes really well. In that way to me it shows a vivid picture in my mind, although I can't understand entirely what the words mean, but the definitions of the words were helpful, everything a person needs to read and understand the poem, with all the works :) Very in depth and precise in what you put into it :) You are strongly against this and show such a horrible yet interesting perspective from the way others perceive it compared to yours. This is a pretty long comment, but I'm pretty open with what I mean and say :) So overall, awesome job! :)

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Walk on the wild side? ? ? ? ? ?

Intense... and very disturbing, as, perhaps, it should be.

I recieved your message to read this poem and as I sat down to begin to read I pictured this happening. This is a very deep and well written piece of art. I'm sorry that this had to happen to you, but I am so grateful that you gave the world the chance to see things from your eyes.

hi nivedita..i realy felt that the poem talks about some problems in our life but i am extremily sory to say that i too felt some difficulties to understand it... iam hapy to read ur poems, hope you will invite for reading ur next poem. »so close«

i dont know what you sead at all