MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Rape Ride Gizmo @ $ 2 ~

~ RAPE RIDE GIZMO @ $ 2 ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
15 June 15,2012

[Dedicated to Dada* Dr. Subhendu Kar]

Voluptuous vulgars ogres
Invented programmed RRG
User's friendly for raper
To penetrate and pound
Those zones of Urania
In feral ferine way with
Drooling voluptuousness
@ $ 2___ONLY__! ! (: [1]



@ $ 0 annexure program
Infixes icky sticky bruise burn
From licentious libertines. [2]

Make victims to learn-ail
Live with slimy piddle of
Male waste stigma
Inedible sanguine tattoos
Of canines claws chiseling
Noma on psyche soma
By wanton wolf raper to
Silently surely sighing
Voiceless weeping
Ouch ow whole life___ [3]

Is it gender biased macho boorish
Innovative Civilization? ? -^-^-^- [4]

* Elder Bro



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Glossary: With humility glossary given for what I tried to express:
[1] Ogres: A giant who likes to eat human beings [folklore]
[2] Icky: Very bad
[3] Feral / Ferine: Wild and menacing
[4] Urania: Goddess of love
[5] Slimy: Morally reprehensible
[6] Piddle: Liquid excretory product
[7] Noma: Ulceration
[8] Ow: Expression of pain

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 14, 2012

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Comments about ~ Rape Ride Gizmo @ $ 2 ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • Joseph Poewhit (7/11/2013 6:20:00 PM)

    Walk on the wild side? ? ? ? ? ?

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  • Tony Karas (12/30/2012 8:39:00 AM)

    Intense... and very disturbing, as, perhaps, it should be.

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  • Craig Mize (11/10/2012 11:41:00 PM)

    I recieved your message to read this poem and as I sat down to begin to read I pictured this happening. This is a very deep and well written piece of art. I'm sorry that this had to happen to you, but I am so grateful that you gave the world the chance to see things from your eyes.

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  • So CloseSo Close (9/11/2012 8:16:00 PM)

    hi nivedita..i realy felt that the poem talks about some problems in our life but i am extremily sory to say that i too felt some difficulties to understand it...
    iam hapy to read ur poems, hope you will invite for reading ur next poem.
    »so close«

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  • Hilton Ball (7/18/2012 1:28:00 PM)

    i dont know what you sead at all

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  • Miranda Mabuto (7/18/2012 12:19:00 AM)

    Very passionate...and powerful

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  • Comfort Ndlovu (7/15/2012 2:46:00 PM)

    A great Protest Poetry piece that excels in invoking thoughts and feelings! I feel your pathos! * (*pathos - feeling (Greek)) .

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  • Fonia Tan (7/15/2012 1:51:00 AM)

    Hmmm...a bit hard to understand....

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  • Nader BaheriNader Baheri (7/13/2012 2:42:00 AM)

    It's a great piece of work.but at firs it is a little bit ununderstandble.maybe it had better you put the definition at first.but it really shows how clever you are that you have invented new ways of your poem.

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  • Amitabha Bagchi (7/2/2012 1:49:00 PM)

    ========================================
    ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ********************
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    From: Dove Allen
    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann
    Date-Time: 7/2/2012 12: 30: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Re: Re: RAPE RIDE GIZMO @ $ 2 ~ niv ~ UK
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    My prior message were my reflections on your work entitled: RAPE RIDE GIZMO

    Warm regards Niv,

    Dove Allen


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    As usual I've to take help of my reader [AB London] to post my In Box comments...how long I've to bear this PH please answer me?
    n

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  • Amitabha Bagchi (7/2/2012 1:47:00 PM)

    ========================================
    ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ********************
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    From: Dove Allen
    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism
    Date-Time: 7/2/2012 12: 27: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: My thoughts in your work
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    Very powerful usage of words to convey your outrage towards the desecration of the 'inner sanctum' of a woman's sacred essence: her body, her mind, her soul!

    As always Niv, you are esoteric in your writing style. Your work(s) when read with the heart but translated by the soul, can be easily be deciphered by those willing to listen with their eyes.

    btw.. what is the meaning of RRG? I wish you would have included this acronym in your glossary. :)

    Poem Hunter’s code system failed...could not post on poem's page!

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  • Chitra - (6/29/2012 11:46:00 PM)

    heart-wrenching....tone impregnated with the harsh reality of women....which is prevalent even in today's times....
    Niv di...you have a very compassionate heart and it shows through your creative work

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  • Irisa Salkic (6/28/2012 11:43:00 PM)

    Well it is very well described in an appropriate manner and very well put together, although I was a little intrigued of how it doesn't quite rhyme yet goes really well. In that way to me it shows a vivid picture in my mind, although I can't understand entirely what the words mean, but the definitions of the words were helpful, everything a person needs to read and understand the poem, with all the works :) Very in depth and precise in what you put into it :) You are strongly against this and show such a horrible yet interesting perspective from the way others perceive it compared to yours. This is a pretty long comment, but I'm pretty open with what I mean and say :) So overall, awesome job! :)

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  • Dp Legaspi (6/28/2012 4:13:00 PM)

    you paint landscapes with your words. it seems every line was clawing back with emotion. truly unique stuff.

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  • Scotty DoggScotty Dogg (6/27/2012 3:24:00 PM)

    I liked it. Unusual to the extreme which is always okay with me. Yes, I liked it. S.

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  • Theo Williams (6/27/2012 12:16:00 PM)

    That was a very sharply expressed poem which engaged me with the pain and really made me feel sick (in a good way) . This vial act of specific (or any) violence toward women is horrible and your poem Ms Nivedita conspicuously dictates the pain that women feel. Impressive write, sublime, keep penning. :)

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  • Vinitha Nandagopal (6/27/2012 12:31:00 AM)

    strong and sharp feelings expressed. Good work..keep writing.

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  • Comfort Ndlovu (6/26/2012 5:18:00 PM)

    Words of pain, expressed in a great, thought-provoking manner! Keep on keeping on, till the whole world realises and tackles the plight of a woman...

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  • Narender Singh Bansal (6/26/2012 12:42:00 PM)

    .............................
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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (6/26/2012 12:24:00 PM)

    ''The distinction between 'kill' and 'help to die' is argued by analogy with the distinction between 'rape' and 'make love to'. ''J.Davies-a very good poem, well penned message-Mari.

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