~ Poetry Is Not Chase Game ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Poetry Is Not Chase Game ~

Rating: 4.7


~ POETRY IS NOT CHASE GAME ~
Ms. Nivedita. UK

Puny Pawn
Blink and frown.

Kinetic Knight moves angular
Words appear hazy blur.

Rock Rook has linear move
Words trove groove.

Bishop airs sermon diagonal
Words fly away tangential.

Doped consonant King
Ploddingly one move can bring.

My words are not Queen
With myriad bow and swing.

Poetry is not chase game
For me a torture tame.

I wait for that poetic vowel
User-friendly loyal royal
Till then I stay like coil.

In readers oceanic love swell
Sure I’ll find my abode cell.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Kraas 28 April 2010

That poem has some life in it.

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Abhinav Baruah 05 March 2010

Your beautiful maneuvers Black or white pause over Bishop swindles King castles Rook swayed the safety Her majesty Eighth ranked pawn Word promotion Thought provocation Heart liberation

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Abhinav Baruah 05 March 2010

e4 d4 c4 b4 How can my Knight cross these lines before Poetry is certainly not a game Love swells and stem Melody melts and tame LOL.... Overjoyed

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Dulakshi Wakista 24 February 2010

Well expressed.Absolutely true.Indeed it's a wonderful poem. I reall loved these lines. Puny Pawn Blink and frown. Kinetic Knight moves angular Words appear hazy blur. Rock Rook has linear move Words trove groove. Bishop airs sermon diagonal Words fly away tangential. Doped consonant King Ploddingly one move can bring. My words are not Queen With myriad bow and swing. Lovely and I really enjoyed this poem.Thanks for sharing.

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adil Khan 16 January 2010

hi niv its marvelous i agree with you -'poetry is not a chess game '.i will give you 10 out of 10 -adil: -)

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Lynn Glover 09 June 2010

A very nice poem, now all I have to do is learn how to play chess. See ya, Lynn.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 05 June 2010

Poetry is not chase game For me a torture tame Well-expressed truth on behalf of poets of all ages. The writing has some more value where values are very rarely practised now-a-days. Good poem with honestly pronounced personal realization. Regards, 10+ Apoet

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 21 May 2010

Sorry to read such a comment in an international poetry forum, ‘I'm sorry I don't play chess.’…by some Senior Poet… Let us keep mum where we don’t understand poem … Dr. V PS Young poets may feel disappointed by such comments V

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 May 2010

I'm sorry I don't play chess.

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Sadiqullah Khan 03 May 2010

These words create a convoluted atmosphere, short of surrealistic idiom, simply because it moves in a matrix, of rapidly changing spatial spaces, some artist might think of dreaming this and the cells might be smaller to accomdate. I do not understand chess any how. Invariably I like the relatioship.

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