MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.


~ Psychosomatic Lingerie ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

From: Sadiqullah Khan
To: Nivedita Bagchi
Date-Time: 12/23/2009 4: 47: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: A Nobel Prize
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See my poem, A Nobel Prize. I have included ur poem there. Is it ok?
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To Poet Sadiqullah Khan:
By love you’ve embosomed my poem…
On the eve of New Year Poet niv
‘Crowning’ your poetic affections
Regards for the honor,
In Ever Poetic Tieship.
niv
31 December,2009.
-
Sadiqullah Khan (12/23/2009 4: 30: 00 AM)

A Nobel Prize

I
As on today
24 Dec,2500 BC
Being the head
Of the committee
Where a beautiful poem
PSYCHOSOMATIC LIGERIE
By MS. NIVEDETA BAGCHI SPC.UK.
Has been submitted
For review
And I hereby
Bestow upon her
And she is
Very kind
To accept
A NOBEL PRIZE
For the reasons
That she has written
Pure and sensible
Human emotions
And feelings
Applause
Congrats
........
24/12/2009
~ PSYCHOSOMATIC LINGERIE ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
24 December,2009.

Its scare
And rare
To get
Privacy
Intimacy.

Don’t care
I do dare
To bare
Psychosomatic
Lingerie
In poetry
Else are
Scary
Parry
Fury
Lurid hungry.

Ms. Nivedita
A wee lory
The Poetry
Her emotional
Sanctuary.

-
Sent to Noble Prize conferring committee:
[In Best Poem category for the year 2500 BC ~ niv ~ LOL! ! ]


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Comments about ~ Psychosomatic Lingerie ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • (8/4/2010 1:28:00 PM)


    Bold and precise. A wonderful interaction of two poets. Well done, lovely! A crown for both! ; D (Report) Reply

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  • (6/22/2010 12:47:00 AM)


    neat-precise-hits the nails where it hurts and words make all the sound
    defintely 10++++++
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  • (5/27/2010 2:58:00 AM)


    As usual a bold poetry

    To bare/Psychosomatic/Lingerie/In poetry/Else are Scary/Parry /Fury…’ sarcastically rhymed

    ‘The Poetry /Her emotional /Sanctuary. ‘…and so indeed for a committed and confirmed poet.
    10++
    Dr. V.
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  • (4/27/2010 2:06:00 PM)


    ‘I do dare/To bare/Psychosomatic/Lingerie/In poetry’

    Thumbs up to your poetic venture…

    Tried to stay nude and truthful to your emotion …

    No concoction pretension and reservation…that’s the spirit

    As reader I whole heartedly support it. Nice reading experience.

    10+
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  • (4/11/2010 2:01:00 PM)


    ‘…Ms. Nivedita/A wee lorry/The Poetry /Her emotional /Sanctuary.’

    Yeah you’re Lory [Australasian parrots having a brush-tipped tongue for feeding on nectar]…

    But origin is India…the country of oldest wisdom and ageless culture

    Reflected in her refuse in Poetry-Sanctuary the most coveted place

    To be feed on nectar the aesthetic fluid for every poet.9
    10++
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  • (1/4/2010 12:35:00 PM)


    Pure and sensible
    Human emotions
    And feelings
    Applause
    Congrats


    wonderful abstract poem, powerful ideas to convey the message


    10++++++++++++
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  • (1/3/2010 1:36:00 AM)


    Amazed by Poets' interpersonal relation and interaction…

    No envy…no rat race…no blaspheme.....just read and enjoy…

    Both Poets are with open stream-lined without any twirl eddies in psyche…/ heart

    Hats off to both poets…cheers
    (Report) Reply

  • Jester's P (1/1/2010 8:32:00 PM)


    i wish you all the best in your work...you are indeed a poet willing to chalenge the world using your wit, humor, and knowledge of the craft.

    congratulations
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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (1/1/2010 7:49:00 PM)


    I wish you many more awards for your contributions like this to the poetry world. (Report) Reply

  • (1/1/2010 1:03:00 PM)


    I sincerely congratulate 1st to Poet Sadiqullah Khan [PSK] for ‘embosoming’ this poem and writing a poem on it…

    2ndly I congratulate Poet Ms. Nivedita for ‘crowning’ poem [A Nobel Prize] of PSK

    3rdly PSK again wrote a poem titled as My New Year Bouquet…

    Excellent fellow feelings and congrats to both the poets.
    AB
    London

    Copy to PSK
    (Report) Reply

  • Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (12/30/2009 2:14:00 PM)


    gives new style in composing and contemplation.especially in the second paragraph the words are arrayed fastidiously..nice (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2009 5:56:00 AM)


    unique cogitation....rhymes all thru.... (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2009 11:02:00 PM)


    interesting....full of new ideas... (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2009 2:44:00 PM)


    To Poet S. Khan,
    Thanks for your honor to me…and I’ve read your poem ‘A Nobel Prize’ where you’ve clubbed this poem …a big poetic heart …hats off to you Sir.
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (12/23/2009 2:06:00 PM)


    Subtly Poet Niv tried to convey that in symbolically-hypothetical-2500-BC’ life was not so much under the lens of.Paparazzo’s, spy cams…scoops…media…and so on.

    Modernity has pirated our ‘intimate-ultimate-sublimate-innate’ Privacy we no more can laugh LOUDLY …open our heart fully lest we’ll be exposed, laughed, cut a sorry figure or my weakness will be surfaced and time pressure!

    All are ‘measured-programmed’… we’re plastered psychosomatically by the red eyes of petticoat of etiquette and foolish mannerism and clichéd modernism etc.

    Create unnecessary aura arrogance grandiose around us…’See how important I’m’ [factually I’m unimportant LOL! ].

    Thank you Poet for your insight.
    dr.sakti
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2009 5:11:00 AM)


    niv,2500bc lol this is an excellent poem sexy in poetry love it 10 (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (12/23/2009 4:30:00 AM)


    A Nobel Prize

    I
    As on today
    24 Dec,2500 BC
    Being the head
    Of the committee
    Where a beautiful poem
    PSYCHOSOMATIC LIGERIE
    By MS. NIVEDETA BAGCHI SPC.UK.
    Has been submitted
    For review
    And I hereby
    Bestow upon her
    And she is
    Very kind
    To accept
    A NOBEL PRIZE
    For the reasons
    That she has written
    Pure and sensible
    Human emotions
    And feelings
    Applause
    Congrats
    ........
    24/12/2009
    (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (12/23/2009 3:12:00 AM)


    Hi Niv - Thank you for another lovely evocative poem. V 1 Is very true Privacy &Intimacy are very rare. V 2 We can be risque in poetry - this verse is packed with innuendo 'scary - parry - fury - lurid - hunger' Awesome - I love it. V 3 We all love your poetry NIV and we do respect your Emotional Sanctuary. Love it - it scores a TEN on all counts. Love you lots in poetry - JOHN X X X (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010


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