Puddles Of Madness Poem by Cordell Rich

Puddles Of Madness

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I wanted more from you than you even had.
How does a man fall so hard and become so blind.
Is it because of a darkness inside of you,
That some how blinds me?
Now I swim in puddles of madness.
Never completely immersed,
But covered none the less.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Atina 30 August 2008

Striking images here!

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Brian Jani 05 May 2014

Nice idea for a poem cordell

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Shimon Weinroth 06 September 2008

Lovely metaphore, puddles says so many things, I like your minimalistic writng

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Melanie Williams 01 September 2008

i am sad to say i have been on both sides of these feelings.... mostly giving unknowingly. good work

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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

Once again in few words you have managed to paint a clear image in my mind. Well done

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Trinity K 30 August 2008

is it true that there is no place never visited... it is my place... any one else was an intruder..! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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