Pulse Poem by Vidi Writes

Pulse

Rating: 5.0


Onset of this phenomenon was with very little initiation
Each gait had its elegant look and depth to be submerged
And there were no qualms and no vacillation in the heart
My Pulse quivered to come in contact with this alluring dawn.

The luminosity was such that it exhibited the forgotten past
It revealed the intensity to be hooked to the tip of iceberg
Darkness started melting and the flow seemed incessant
My Pulse had the glance of radiance and got fine-tuned.

Every pulsate of mine has its high and low like ebb and flow
And I am not an exception in this trendy world of sensation
Rise with new dawn and fall to dusk is quite natural affair
My Pulse knows its limit of apex and the base in each whip.

Life is in between this enormous strength of beating pulses
These pulses should be tuned to the prevailing situations
Joy of the zenith and pain of nadir to be grossly balanced
My Pulse discerns this truth and thrives to be at equilibrium.

-vidi-
01-02-08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 07 March 2009

The last para thoughtfully and beautifully sums up the philosophy of life! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 January 2009

This is very fine work, Vidi...I am surprised to find that this posting got past the eye's of so many.If i could make a suggsetion...that you cut / paste & repost this pen-gem with the word(Re-Post) parathesised, as shown, here, directly next to the title.'PULSE' Post it when you see names on line that you know like to read you...I'll bet you get a lot of reads, along with much positive feedback. Yes, i concur with your dartingly philosophical message on establishing the theoretical Yin/Yang mantra, in obtaining inner-peace, self-control, and general stability in life....Excellent penning, young lady! F j R 2009

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