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Outlook

Rating: 5.0

Deep red, gradual transformation to Orange then Gold
Follows the yellow, then spread the color blue
Color of the Dawn, pure and cool
Moisture of Blooming love, Outlook -Splendid Clever.

Direct, indirect day light of sun above the horizon
Diffused at length and breadth of the sky
Color of the Day, calm and charm
Fragrance of life, Outlook – Aesthetic Cipher

Deep red, gradual transformation to Orange then Gold
Follows the yellow, in the absence of color Blue
Color of Sunset, arrogant and dark
Aridity of withering, Outlook – Crystal Clear.

('Attitude' is the Intent here)

-Vidi-
05/05/2009

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a vivid right on the different shades of the sun associating it to moods....lovely

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Indira Renganathan 12 May 2009

Colours of a day...colours of life...moods well expressed 10++++++++

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 May 2009

Good imagery......perception.colour and its transformation as a theme is good

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Mamta Agarwal 11 May 2009

unique presentation. its how we percieve, that transforms how we feel, act and believe. change is natural, in a day we have mood swings, wise know life has rhythms... impressive write 10+++ Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 11 May 2009

good write...good imagination and concept inside...i liked...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 March 2016

Splendid clever! Thanks for sharing.

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Bob Blackwell 21 June 2009

What we see depends on the beauty that we store, without it we cannot see the beauty of our world. Full of beauty to me, also means full of love for all we see. It gives us appreciation that life changes constantly, the sun sets to rise again on yet a different world. You are so right, our attitude determines what we see. Vidi, thank you for this inspiring poem. Bob

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rago rago 19 June 2009

best write........ emotions, colour and poetic verses well knitted........

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Now, Vidi, , my dear young lady... i have heard of colour by numbers....but colour by emotional spectrum? Well....this is CLEARLY a metaphoric microcosm of metaphysical mantra & believe it or not, albeit you have composed this piece from an abstruse contemporary vein....the finest prose & poetry of the 17th century was through the employment of a metaphysical theme via ne-plus-ultra imagery.Are you sure about your age? lol! Brilliant inventivity, young Poetess! FjR

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 May 2009

wonderful art of paint by colors in expression as transformation is the vivid process of metamorphosis, simply beautiful yet with ingenious flow interlinking, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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