Punishment Poem by Jeevan Aryal

I work for co operation, For harmony and unification, To have peace, ... very sarcastic poem but pointing to the facts of life today......... even the justice system if full of sin. we cannot rely on anyone....... let God alone come to our rescue........ just fine a poem.. write dear poet in these lines...... thank you for your audacity.. tony

A good poetic approach. Thanks

very good......respected judge

Interesting poem Jeevan sir

Humanity and standard of being human as brotherhood is worthful.Thanks for sharing Jeevan.

Very nice poem fighting for humanity

Fighting for universal brotherhood of man and humanity is an ideal worth dying for. Very poignant rendition. Thanks for sharing Jeevan.

Very good interesting Respected judge

Such punishment is only for the lucky ones. We need to do more of violence and killing to avoid sentence. Good to see a poem on contradiction living.