Pupal Slumber Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Pupal Slumber

Rating: 5.0

I am a larva, a caterpillar
who entered her pupal slumber.
Yes! It is time I tear open
the prison of yarn for me you've spun.

I know, today I'll spring wings,
for me will open the skies endless
and my day will dawn, of a sun
that shines just for me, have no doubt!

I was a larva crawling,
a loathsome sight, sure,
but, when this night dawns
will I no longer squirm!

I'll be a butterfly fluttering across
the bright skies on my wings
as colourful as the rainbow,
as beautiful as a blossom.

devouring tasteless leaves
damaging the plants and trees
gnawing at loneness and fear
I lived a parasite, led a life of guile;

henceforth I will live on nectar sweet,
specially prepared for me to eat,
will lead a life fruitful, aiding pollination:
thus I'll be a cause of fruits in abundance.

I discard this life abominable
as a disgusting larva that wriggles,
the lofty birds of flight I'd join!
the world would, in awe, watch!

Tuesday, January 9, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly,life,plants,wings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This metaphorical poem is a commentary on the life of every person who is downtrodden, discriminated, victimised, marginalised and sidelined.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 10 January 2024

Excellent write and very much insightful really.Thanks for sharing.

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This is a commentary of the life of all those deprived, the victims of greed of those in power

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Alyx True Edge 20 July 2024

Beautiful and meaningful metaphors, well written in my view

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As Poet Geeta Radhakrishna Menon has said the caterpillar is a fitting metaphor for girls and girlhood. Thank you Alyx

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A new dawn! Everyone has a right to dream one! As every larva should covet her life as a butterfly

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2024

Absolutely a brilliant poem! The third line deserves attention. Top score and to my favourites

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Thank you Dillipji. You have taken much care to analyse the poem in depth. Obliged

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 January 2024

Wonderfully brilliant TFS

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Thank you, poet LeeAnn. Life's rainbows are thus, though rare

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 January 2024

Top marks for this excellent poem and to my favourite too,

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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