Pure Tool Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Pure Tool

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I looked in her eyes
And desperately tried
To read her response
It was unbelievable and with innocence

She was unstoppable
Making me more to struggle
To read more with earnest
I still made bid to try best

“No, it is not your style”
You think over it meanwhile
I shall disappear soon
As sun makes fast to noon

Does any one what you are?
Honestly speak as you are far?
I took serious view and asserted
Love is first to be purely inserted

I know about rainbow colors
But above and all stands honor
My pride stops at some one
To ask for love and offer smile

I find no definition
It may be self inhibition
I know for sure love is not exchange commodity
It is pure tool designed by an almighty

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I looked in her eyes And desperately tried

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:) Broken Lullabies 17 minutes ago Very beautifully written! Loved it :)

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great poem! L spirit17 minutes ago please keep writing!

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Savita Tyagi 05 May 2014

Very nice. Love is as mysterious as ever and for sure a pure tool of procreation in Almighty's hands.

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Savita Tyagi 05 May 2014

Very nice poem. As ever it is mysterious and for sure a pure tool for procreation in Almighty's hands.

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Gajanan Mishra 05 May 2014

love is not exchange commodity, very fine and true sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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