Quarters Comments

A heart touching depiction has been made astutely on life with plights in this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10

We are moved by the sad plight of people who have only a hand to mouth existence and who are crushed under the grinding wheel of Fate! A poem written with great depth of feeling!

:) . actually that car hits, and then there would be no poem, let's try some time travel. Nice reading, reading the monotonous life and everything is no more shocking than a beautiful and sudden death.

Wow very interesting way u relate here. ESP enjoyed the ants part wow. Thumbs up for your style and the scenarios depicted nicely. So Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u too will review my latest poem titled, 'For all cheese chums'

You certainly do not limit yourself to structure or topic or world view. This is such an outstanding poem just as so many of your other works are but it is off in its own new field of thought and elements of style. I cannot tell you how much I like what you've done here- -it is starkly real but there is an undercurrent of caring about these people- -they are not just something to write about, the reader feels they are real and their sadnesses and their follies are important to you and to us . 10+++++++++++++++

Quarters, lot of scenarios that we can observe daily... i am chuckle a bit when i read this part: she told me No pretty braces Wires to fix my broken jaw she slurping ....that sound funny to me, lol sorry i just cant help myself hahahaha

Very poignant and insightful.

A well penned poem on the terrible plight of the poor. I am so grateful for our public health and our welfare system here in New Zealand. We are so lucky.