I see the glow of a candle fade,
So tender and sublime,
I know the quest has begun,
My race with time.
The chill is coming near,
Every passing second,
Inner strength is diminishing,
No hopes to amend.
Groans of misery and dismay,
Have started filling the air,
All I can feel around,
Is a wave of despair.
Drugs are alms to my life,
Machines control my oxygen,
My trunk is too atrophied,
Waiting to see the dungeon.
I smile with the memories of past,
When the sun shined in the rain,
Because now I only see solitude,
Painful than any pain.
[This composition is dedicated to all cancer patients across the globe....especially those who are left alone by thier loved ones]
Your dedicated confession should be put in the beginning. I vote you by heart more...more than thousands. A good writing with a mild blow of departing. Well Preetam, you have touched the poetry by heart. Run long and write more.....more........ Thank you very much, 10+++++ pranab
Groans of misery and dismay, Have started filling the air, All I can feel around, Is a wave of despair. in these lines u bring in real despair of those who suffer. i praise your magnanimity to dedicate a poem to people who suffer from cancer. it is a great work especially when u think of the sufferings of others.
I really respect your love for humanity. There are so many bad people out there, but there are so many good people who make up for the bad, even with their little bit of love. But I suppose the bad people aren't bad, they just do some bad things.. I feel that everyone has the ability to do good in this world. Even if it's just a small gesture. Thankyou for your powerful words.... Marina Gasbey....
Hey Preetam this poem is really very good......... Soo wel written....... God bless
WELL WRITTEN PREETAM, WE ALL MUST HAVE HAD OUR LIVES TOUCHED BY THIS DREADFUL MODERN CURSE.RAISING AWARENESS CAN ONLY BE A POSITVE THING. GUY
VERY EVOCOTIVE, WE MUST ALL OF HAD OUR LIVES TOUCHED IN SOME WAY BY CANCER, I LOST A SOULMATE VERY RECENTLY, AND IF GOOD PIECES OF WRITING LIKE THIS RAISES AWARENESS OF THIS MODERN DAY CURSE, THEN ALL THE BETTER. WELL DONE, MY FRIEND PREETAM
VERY EVOCOTIVE, WE MUST ALL OF HAD OUR LIVES TOUCHED IN SOME WAY BY CANCER, I LOST A SOULMATE VERY RECENTLY, AND IF GOOD PIECES OF WRITING LIKE THIS RAISES AWARENESS OF THIS MODERN DAY CURSE, THEN ALL THE BETTER. WELL DONE, MY FRIEND PREETAM
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is really too hard wonderful indeed hoe u and all cancer patients will be better and fine soon... thanks for sharing :)