hassan hayati


Rain - Poem by hassan hayati

On the land of red tulips, it rains
On the sad night of agony, it rains
Rain, on the holy graves of comrades
On my restless eyes, it rains
My heart eyes, all directions
Each single moment, a daffodil once
And a pansy another time
On the thirsty land of my chest, it rains
Scarlet my face, hopeful my heart
To join the traveled pigeons
Looking desperately for the moment
On the blue ocean of my dreams, it rains
Wash my soul, rain, wash my heart
Give me new life in every single part
I have been pinned, for the severance pain
On the pin leaves, of the pine, it rains
I love you rain, I love you
On the wooden coffin, in the grave yard
On my immortal tomorrow house
On the tomb stone of mine, it rains

Topic(s) of this poem: lyric

Form: Lyric


Comments about Rain by hassan hayati

  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (4/25/2019 4:40:00 AM)

    I missed reading it when it was the Poem of the day. But i am so happy that i read it now.
    Please accept my heartiest congratulations for a wonderful poem, dear Poet Hassan.......A full score!
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    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(4/26/2019 10:37:00 PM)

    I appreciate your kind attention, this is very encouraging to see an expert writes a comment like this on my words.

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (4/25/2019 4:37:00 AM)

    A beautiful and brilliant poem on rain. You have created magic with rain drops. It rains everywhere and is one constant factor with all objects of nature. It rains on flowers and trees, mountains and oceans and rains on man when he lives and when he dies too. Wonderful words, metaphors with a concept so unique.. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (4/24/2019 7:31:00 AM)

    On the blue ocean of my dreams, it rains/Wash my soul, rain, wash my hear....I find fascinating poetic beauty in your poetic expression! A wonderful poem dear friend....10 (Report)Reply

    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(4/25/2019 12:27:00 AM)

    thanks Dr. It is my pleasure to see your comment here about my writes. it is hope making.

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (12/25/2018 4:54:00 AM)

    Beautifully crafted poem on rain that sloths in pleasure and pain that overcomes strain. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (1/16/2018 10:02:00 PM)

    A lovely poem by Hassan, the divine downpours can wash all on this earth. (Report)Reply

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  • Bipasha DBipasha D (1/7/2018 7:24:00 PM)

    Its a gem of a poem. It really touched my heart.
    Warm regards, Bipasha
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  • Glen KappyGlen Kappy (12/30/2017 6:46:00 AM)

    hassan, aware of you now from your comment on my poem, i'm reading your postings and came on this one. i guess that you too live in a place where rain is precious. i have a number of poems on rain, a few that are prayers. the one that resembles this one begins and is titled, refresh, o God. you might like it. he blessing of rain and all the good it represents be yours. -glen kappy (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (10/26/2017 11:49:00 PM)

    Exquisitely crafted poem where rain is a constant companion that brings solace
    in life of a man and in death. Thanks and Congrats.
    On the thirsty land of my chest, it rains
    On the blue ocean of my dreams, it rains
    Give me new life.. I love you rain....
    On the tomb stone of mine, it rains
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    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/28/2017 3:33:00 AM)

    Thank you Ranjish, this shows your accurate attention. Yes Thirsty Land and blue ocean, you know rain falls in all places, this is the God Mercy.
    new life and tomb stones, Yes Death can also be a new life.
    I really enjoyed your brilliant and Precise attention.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/26/2017 4:36:00 PM)

    CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your poem here as the poem of the day. This is my revisit to this poem. Already I have given my feedback earlier. Wishing you all the best...10 (Report)Reply

    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/28/2017 3:27:00 AM)

    I really appreciate all the encouragements made by you. I like to say, MERCY.

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (10/26/2017 11:50:00 AM)

    A rare and beautiful rain poem I have ever read on this site. Loved the lyrics as well as the rain-bathed rhythm that continues till the end.
    Would love to quote the lines...
    I love you rain, I love you
    On the wooden coffin, in the grave yard
    On my immortal tomorrow house
    On the tomb stone of mine, it rains

    Congrats for the selection as POTD.
    Regards.
    Subhas
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    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/28/2017 3:21:00 AM)

    This comment encourages me a lot , Thank you so much for being a support.

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  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (10/26/2017 11:03:00 AM)

    Congratulations on your poem being selected as the 'Poem of the Day'. Well done!
    The last four lines touched me deep!
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    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/28/2017 2:05:00 AM)

    I am Happy to see a comment like this. Thank you for the hearty attention.
    Tashakkor = appreciation in Farsi

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (10/26/2017 8:24:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with a beautiful flow. Can't halt till the end. So nice.
    'Scarlet my face, hopeful my heart
    To join the traveled pigeons
    Looking desperately for the moment
    On the blue ocean of my dreams, it rains
    Wash my soul, rain, wash my heart
    Give me new life in every single part'... is simply awesome. Congrats.
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    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/28/2017 1:59:00 AM)

    seeing a comment like this is really a new hope. It makes me more and more eager and encourages me to be more active every day.
    SEPAS= it means Thanks in Farsi (Persian) my mother tongue.

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  • Arnab Kumar RoyArnab Kumar Roy (10/26/2017 4:59:00 AM)

    Some people feel the rain, others just get wet. (Report)Reply

    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/28/2017 1:47:00 AM)

    what a brilliant point of view, thank you, we have a saying in Farsi (my mother tongue)
    what you see is just the hair, what I see is the Twist of the hair
    Thank you for your comment.

    Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan(10/26/2017 10:59:00 AM)

    Well said, @Arnab Kumar Roy!

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  • Upendra Upm (10/26/2017 3:53:00 AM)

    .wonderful poem..Congratulations. (Report)Reply

    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/30/2017 6:54:00 AM)

    I am sorry to answer your comment late, it was my eyes fault, I appreciate your kind attention.

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  • Tom Allport (10/26/2017 3:11:00 AM)

    a superb poem that rains down on us the true reality of being here and now? ..................well written Hassan (Report)Reply

    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/26/2017 3:55:00 AM)

    Thank you very much for your comment, Yes when the condition is prepared we can feel Duality in some poems. I appreciate your feelings. Thank you

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  • Geoffrey FafardGeoffrey Fafard (10/26/2017 3:04:00 AM)

    This is a poem of immense depth, colour and feeling. I just love it. Thank you Hassan for a wonderful read. Geoffrey. (Report)Reply

    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/26/2017 3:53:00 AM)

    I appreciate your kind support, I really Love the rain, thanks.

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (10/26/2017 2:59:00 AM)

    Wonderful timely poem to read seeing rain falling all over the place we live here! The poem flows like rain water flowing long! (Report)Reply

    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/26/2017 3:51:00 AM)

    oh it seems the coincidence has made the atmosphere in similar condition. any way I am encouraged by your kind attention and comment, TASHAKKOR (in Farsi means Thanks)

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (10/26/2017 2:40:00 AM)

    A lovely prayer to be rained with inner bliss, hope and enlightenment- - -To quote a few lines- -
    Wash my soul, rain, wash my heart
    Give me new life in every single part
    I have been pinned, for the severance pain
    On the pin leaves, of the pine, it rains
    I love you rain, I love you
    On the wooden coffin, in the grave yard
    On my immortal tomorrow house
    On the tomb stone of mine, it rains - - - - - - - - - - Congratulations for this marvellous poem selected as Poem of the Day.
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    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/26/2017 3:48:00 AM)

    Thank you, for the understanding, some times it is hard to transfer your feeling through some lines. Thank you for attention and support.

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (10/26/2017 2:10:00 AM)

    Such an awesome lyrical write, Hassan...congrats for being chosen.....a highest 10++++ (Report)Reply

    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/26/2017 3:45:00 AM)

    Happy that I have the opportunity to thank you for your attention. I was waiting for this chance to say THANKS BERNARD.

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (10/26/2017 1:39:00 AM)

    On the land of red tulips, it rains
    On the sad night of agony, it rains
    Rain, on the holy graves of comrades
    On my restless eyes, it rains
    My heart eyes, all directions
    Each single moment, a daffodil once
    And a pansy another time

    Hassan, you have written a beautiful poem - a combination of nature - the pretty flowers, the rain, and the intense emotion of a graveyard where friends are buried.
    I can visualise the whole scene. Well done!
    Congratulations! Full vote for you
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    Hassan HayatiHassan Hayati(10/26/2017 3:44:00 AM)

    these supports are really reinforcing my thoughts and I like to say It is a happy day for me. MERCY

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 20, 2017



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