The rule of love
I spoke, I advised
It did not work
I kept mute, did it ever work?
I focused on the heart
No result
I ignored a long while, that delicate part
Then I smiled, I frowned
I laughed, I cried
It did not work
Heart headed its own way and taste
Then I just innocently followed I was chaste
It took me to the Love Land
How eyeful, pretty I saw no band
Not usually brain is correct and right
Be brave and follow your heart
With all might
The birds get more love under the rain
While you get sick there, as per the rule of brain
The rule of love is strange
It can face the whole world a big change
Love is something that has no rules, nothing is wrong in love and nothing is right in love. Love is above all rules and laws. A lovely poem.
this is my great pleasure to see your heart warming comments sir, thank you
Hassan, just read some of your beautiful poems. You have a way of writing verses that is appealing. The rule of love is strange and unpredictable. I love your picture with the two birds.
Dear, Dr. Menon; For me it is great honor to see your comments about the lines I write. it is always encouraging to receive heart warming words from an Expert. I appreciate.
This is a beautiful poem on love having stunning expression and nice collocations. Let me quote.......... The birds get more love under the rain While you get sick there, as per the rule of brain The rule of love is strange It can face the whole world a big change Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.10
Sorry for late response Kumar I was on a job mission in far. I really appreciate your attention, It is so much kind of you to read my writings.
I was quite moved when reading this carefully woven masterpiece
thank you very much Stella. I appreciate your attention. SEPAS, it means Thanks in Persian language.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hen I just innocently followed I was chaste It took me to the Love Land How eyeful, pretty I saw no band Not usually brain is correct and right Be brave and follow your heart.. very great advice. follow your inspirations. follow your heart. tony
thanks DR. for your encouraging comment.