Rain Is Falling Poem by the poet

Rain Is Falling

Rating: 3.8

Rain, rain, its always raining,
Rain, rain, I end up saying,
Rain, rain, please go away now,
Rain, rain, just leave right now,
Rain, rain, don’t know how,
I don’t care how,
To make my rainy day just go away…

So I stand,
in the pouring rain,
So I can,
feel the growing pain,
Of having rain,
coming down like the Armageddon flame.

I can see raindrops playing their game,
Even though they look the same,
I know that there is more to rain……

Rani Turton 22 March 2008

Rain and emotion have always spoken to the poet. I liked this poem. Keep posting and bravo.

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Jasmine Margetson 22 March 2008

rain is the worst huh? ..i love this poem..it expresses how desperate we can be to jus have all the sun come..but embrace the rain it makes the sunny days more meaningful..i love this poem though..so stand in the rain..cuz it'l make ur sunn that much sweeter.

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Melvina Germain 17 June 2007

It very quickly made me think of that old cliche 'Rain, rain go away come again another day'. Good poem, lots of rain.--Melvina--

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Liz Elizabeth 03 August 2007

yes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! rain, please go away! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! YOU HAD MEDE MY LONG HAIR A BAD SMELL! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

invoking poem....rain brings both ablessing and a curse, your onomatopoeic language filled the view with rain...... nice venture

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Jackie Lively 06 January 2009

Well.....I liked the poem, but I am afraid I don't agree with you not liking the rain but however my money is on the fact that you live some where where it rains all the time, and you hate it, yes? If not than you live some where where it rains not at all and you where having a wet time....but I could still be wrong and you cold have just wrighten this poum to mess with me but you know I just don't see that as being true :) very nice. 9

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Nathalie Petersson 20 July 2008

Beautiful, good work :)

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Lily Law 20 April 2008

your poem is kinda cute... it remind me to a friend of mine who love rain, opposite with i am..

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Victoria Black 08 April 2008

I like it alot. Its pretty cool. I dont always like Rain either. BUt some times i like to dance in the rain

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Sandra Osborne 24 March 2008

Well, you get accross your point, but it just 'reads' try putting more of how you feel, make the reader feel your feelings. I will read more.. keep writing.

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