! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Rain Pain- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Rain Pain- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.2


Marooned driver says
Rain be damned, am hungry; what
Just water and jam?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 08 August 2009

i visualise the flooded roads and the traffic jam there...intelligent and imaginative write...10

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Vaibhav Pandey 01 August 2009

very clever and witty....I just loved it....10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 July 2009

Just water and jam..........hahahahaha...........your imagination is great Mamtaji.

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Rakesh Bedi 28 July 2009

The clincher in this poem is the word jam; very cleverly and intelligently used, mamta!

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