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Rain's Eloquent Sorrow, Unheard When

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Rain's eloquent sorrow, unheard when
Youth's surge was proceeding
More impressionably wrung out of
A subsequent heeding!

Talk, once run-related, spluttered
In meaninglessness about
Struck of, when night-slouched prints, for
Loneliness leave no doubt.
Saturday, August 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: past,present,rain
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COMMENTS
Cynthia Buhain-baello 03 January 2020
I love the style and the stressed words left to be pondered upon, a deeply touching poem perfected in brevity.
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james watkin 04 January 2020
Thankyou so very much Cynthia.
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Nosheen Irfan 06 September 2019
A remarkably insightful poem on rain. Stunning imagery.
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james watkin 07 September 2019
Thankyou so much Nosheen. Most appreciated.
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Julia Luber 01 September 2019
One of the many splendid skills of this poet is to use the sounds of words with entanglement and rhythm one to the others, and the dance therein amongst them is twisted and rich.
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james watkin 01 September 2019
Thankyou so much again Julia for that lovely comment. Much appreciated.
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Mahtab Bangalee 31 August 2019
Rain's eloquent sorrow, unheard when Youth's surge was proceeding More impressionably.........///wow excellent expression
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james watkin 01 September 2019
Thankyou so much Mahtab!
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