james watkin

Gold Star - 31,535 Points (26/4/65 / Melbourne Australia)

Rain's Eloquent Sorrow, Unheard When - Poem by james watkin

Rain's eloquent sorrow, unheard when
Youth's surge was proceeding
More impressionably wrung out of
A subsequent heeding!

Talk, once run-related, spluttered
In meaninglessness about
Struck of, when night-slouched prints, for
Loneliness leave no doubt.

Topic(s) of this poem: past, present, rain


Comments about Rain's Eloquent Sorrow, Unheard When by james watkin

  • Nosheen Irfan (9/6/2019 9:38:00 AM)

    A remarkably insightful poem on rain. Stunning imagery. (Report)Reply

    (9/7/2019 2:53:00 AM)

    Thankyou so much Nosheen. Most appreciated.

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  • (9/1/2019 10:04:00 AM)

    One of the many splendid skills of this poet is to use the sounds of words with entanglement and rhythm one to the others, and the dance therein amongst them is twisted and rich. (Report)Reply

    (9/1/2019 7:40:00 PM)

    Thankyou so much again Julia for that lovely comment. Much appreciated.

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (8/31/2019 11:24:00 PM)

    Rain's eloquent sorrow, unheard when
    Youth's surge was proceeding
    More impressionably.........///wow excellent expression
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    james watkin(9/1/2019 1:06:00 AM)

    Thankyou so much Mahtab!

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 31, 2019

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 5, 2019


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