Time, Void Of Use, A Wasteland

Rating: 5.0

Time, void of use, a wasteland
Is how we see you now.
Stretched out, monotonous. Gladder
Passed through having to plough!

By which routine, events' crops
In proper sequence sown
A varied taste brought life; and
Better for it were known.

Wednesday, August 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: time,today
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 September 2021

A very good recipe! Taste of life.... brilliantly expressed!

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Soran M. H 27 August 2020

another amazing philosophical piece of work, short and sharp, deep and meaningful, needs more thinking and each time we come to a new conclusion about the time, past and life, I like the phrase 'events' crops'.. well done and it deserves 10+

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Soran M. H 27 August 2020

By which routine, events' crops In proper sequence sown

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Soran M. H 27 August 2020

Stretched out, monotonous; more Glad, passing through did plough.

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james watkin 27 December 2020

Not sure if i thanked you. For uplifting appreciative comments. Thankyou

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