Rainy Days Poem by Eddie Roa

Rainy Days

Rating: 4.9


Rain chatters annoyingly
An incessant harangue on metal sheets
Drums, grates, pesters my listlessness

A lackluster sun sinks ever so weakly
On a jagged silhouette of somber evergreens
Its gilt edge no more than erose rustiness

I remember the ugliness of the day
The slate gray of twilight taking over
Amidst the harassment of an obstinate rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 29 January 2009

Yes! Eddie, Rainy days bring much more notions to the solitary mind and turns into great poems.Good luck!

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It is true, rainy days make us introspective and a bit unhappy. Great poem! Well done.

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Desiree Burdick 29 January 2009

rainy days= unhappiness love the poem

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Glenn Mark Amor 03 February 2009

Good piece sir... beautiful poem

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Alexandra Gray 03 February 2009

Very nice piece..rainy days usually depict sorrow but nevertheless it is also my favorite since it is the perfect time for me to be alone in my room & ponder things on my own.+10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 February 2009

Sometimes rainy days unwantedly prevail. I like the last stanza of the poem. Regards Naseer

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Zaarah Jasmin 01 February 2009

i strongly agree with krista, a 10..for you and thank u for sharing your thoughts..

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nice piece i like you're thoughts Krista

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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