Random Feelings Poem by Kaeim Latrom

Random Feelings

Rating: 5.0


They keep appearing again and again.
Like seasons and weathers,
these phases of happiness and pain.
Engulfing me, I knew it right.
I could feel it but couldn't fight.
Empty nights with blurry sights,
late yet I would realize
that I was red again,
it was all blue again.
The colors would change soon.
Warm like the sun,
Cold like the moon.
They keep changing again and again.
Like days and nights,
these phases of happiness and pain.

Saturday, April 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2018

Welcome to PoemHunter...Lately you can realize that every colour changes according to time. Sun and moon again and again smile. Pain is removed and happiness acquires place. This poem is wonderful and really very thoughtful...10

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Mysia Hayling 12 April 2018

Great piece of work. I enjoyed reading it. Well put together to evoke great meaning so appealing. Thanks for sharing. keep writing.

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Kaeim Latrom 01 June 2019

Yes, thank you. :)

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 April 2018

A great and Universal truth, the ever changing cycles of nature and the Universe, You have done a good start dear Kaeim Your lines that appealed me so much are.. .I could feel it but couldn't fight. Empty nights with blurry sights, late yet I would realize that I was red again, it was all blue again. 10+++++++ for the poem dear.

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Kaeim Latrom 10 April 2018

I guess. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 08 April 2018

Sad introspection set aside for sober reflection. Heartfelt poem with strong emotions.

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 April 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Kaeim. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kaeim Latrom 10 April 2018

Thank you and sure I'll read it.

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Unwritten Soul 07 April 2018

Kaeim, you are not alone...because i do believe most of us if not all of us feel it most of time, as i myself do locked in this phase too...what makes me feel better, i have to accept what God decided good for me, and we always has chance to make it better, bad today never mean to stay forever, it will be gone anyway..Nice poetry, it so much colours u added in it

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Kaeim Latrom 07 April 2018

Yes, thank you.

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