...Random Musing Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...Random Musing

Rating: 5.0


The hallucinated image
of a wholesome
darkness.
flashing its incandescence,
in the eyes of its unknown ghost

my eyes,
groping for an inkling if its reflection
squirt from here and there…
and rest on the banks,
of a glittering afterthought.

huh,
its only me
and this unfathomable I.
And our eternal hide-and-seek.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 09 June 2009

good piece on hallucination..nice 2 read.10

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Indira Babbellapati 09 June 2009

o, yeah...the eternal hide-and-seek...will it ever end?

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Ritty Patnaik 22 September 2009

dear sarvesh......the wholesome darkness sounds so perfect, in this poemto play the eternal hide and seek! i loved these lines, and the poem which carries deep meaning.just loved this poem. ritty

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Catrina Heart 29 August 2009

its only me and this unfathomable I. And our eternal hide-and-seek. --------- wow what a fabulous expression....great poetic lines..Awesome theme...10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 20 June 2009

'...a wholesome darkness flashing its incandescence'... nice expression this...poetic bright...good work Sarvesh...deep thoughts i must say...10

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Maitreyee Joshi 16 June 2009

a lovely hide and seek, i must say.thanks sarvesh

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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 June 2009

great imagery. Beautiful

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