Effectiveness of a emotion
Isn't in its explosive outbursts.
It isn't there for making a random post.
Its intensity first needs to be coalesced
And lived through a blood boiling, aching heart,
Or in a beauteous heart dancing in rain with joy,
Before it seeps into poetry to captivate
A reader's heart and mind.
Effectiveness of emotion is brought up by beauteous heart with exploring beauty of own thoughts. Emotion builds foundation of poetry. A poetry touches reader's mind and heart. This poem is excellently penned...10
Yes of course, and it strikes a chord somewhere, well said.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Or in a beauteous heart dancing in rain with joy, Before it seeps into poetry to captivate A reader's heart and mind......Admirable expression.....top score.