Random Thoughts - कुछ ख़्यालात Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Random Thoughts - कुछ ख़्यालात

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Your condition is no different than mine
We got what we didn't want, no regrets yet.

The lines of hands kept doing wonders
What happened we didn't do, no regrets yet.

Is it called fate, is it called destiny?
That we take breath at someone's will.
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तेरा भी हाल मेरे हाल से जुदा नहीं
जो चाहा हमने मिला नहीं
जो मिला उसका गिला नहीं

लकीरें हाथों की, कमाल करती रही
वो हुआ जो किया नहीं
जो करना था वो हुआ नहीं

क्या मुक़द्दर इसे कहते है, क्या तक़दीर ये होती है
सांसे हम लेते है और मर्ज़ी किसी की चलती है

Friday, February 5, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny,fate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajan Trajan Renganathan 07 February 2021

Very well written poem, I enjoyed it.

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Michael Jack 07 February 2021

Awesome thoughts. A thoughtful poem.

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Aarzoo Mehek 05 February 2021

Dheron sawal jiska koi jawab nahi milta. Shayad issi kashmakash ka naam hi zindagi hai. Beautifully expressed.

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Rajnish Manga 05 February 2021

Excellent poem embellished by some beautiful images. Some remind me of the dialogues from Hindi movies Mugha-e-Azam and Pakeezah.

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Varsha M 05 February 2021

Wah wah janab. Sans hum lete hain aur Marzi kisi sur ki....kya khub kha gaye Asim janab kaya pal kay bal sab lagne laga hai ab barabar.

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