Rare Poem by Dawn Novus

Rare

Rating: 5.0


This time
As never before
Swimming in such sweet thoughts
The king of my heart
The tortured artist through
And through
The divine sailor
Of lolling lyrical oceans
You take the wind
From my lungs
I will always be lost
Don't want to be found
Lost meandering
In your diamond lensed sight
Your so
Very very rare
I flirt between believing
This love
This earth turning, red yearning trail burning
Love that's ours
Is borne into unmeasurable privilege
You so beautiful
Its boast being
Loves greatest story
Laying bare its tale
Before us

Monday, September 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: true love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 08 November 2017

Sweet thoughts! ! Love and dreams! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

Love that's ours Is borne into unmeasurable privilege You so beautiful Its boast being Loves greatest story Laying bare its tale Before us... lovely theme. Brilliant poem on love beautifully shared. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 September 2017

The divine sailor Of lolling lyrical oceans You take the wind From my lungs I will always be lost Don't want to be found Wow your poem really renders a wonderful feeling, a feeling to be lost in the mist of love. Thanks poet for this sharing. 10+++

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Sarah Persson 04 September 2017

A beautiful poem of love

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