Love In Time Poem by Dawn Novus

Love In Time

Rating: 5.0

My ten year one

My beloved son

Just turned to me and into my eyes said:

"Mum, time is like living and love is like being...

You reckon? "

"Yeah, I reckon" nonchalantly

Bursting full of a sweet feeling

Inside dying in pride.

Thursday, March 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: timeless
Nudershada Cabanes 01 March 2018

A sweet poem Dawn. What a feeling it must be to hear your 10 year old say those wonderful things to you. Lovely.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 March 2018

Dawn, such a lovely poem...10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 April 2022

A lovely poem dear poetess...loved it

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Thomas Plotz 09 October 2018

My ten year one - I have met some of them + & - Great poem

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Sandra Feldman 23 March 2018

Your son must have the intuition of a Poet's heart, Aside from being, very smart. Loved the last line, 'inside dying with pride' The mother's natural feeling and intuition, Of what to hide. A very different but quite memorable poem. Impressed.

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Glen Kappy 11 March 2018

wow! dawn. this is quite something from a ten-year old. and how true. in love is clarity. in love we taste eternity. i too would have made a poem out of his comment. -glen

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 March 2018

Sweet feeling! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Stay blessed always. Greetings to your son.

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