My ten year one
My beloved son
Just turned to me and into my eyes said:
"Mum, time is like living and love is like being...
You reckon? "
"Yeah, I reckon" nonchalantly
Bursting full of a sweet feeling
Inside dying in pride.
Your son must have the intuition of a Poet's heart, Aside from being, very smart. Loved the last line, 'inside dying with pride' The mother's natural feeling and intuition, Of what to hide. A very different but quite memorable poem. Impressed.
wow! dawn. this is quite something from a ten-year old. and how true. in love is clarity. in love we taste eternity. i too would have made a poem out of his comment. -glen
Sweet feeling! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Stay blessed always. Greetings to your son.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A sweet poem Dawn. What a feeling it must be to hear your 10 year old say those wonderful things to you. Lovely.