Raven On The Roof Poem by Rajan T Renganathan

Nice observation on the crow. Interesting poem

Fantastic satire, I liked this kind of poem which makes you think hard. It can be applied to those who play victim of nothing...

Sometimes I can't quite figure out why crows do what they do. I wrote a prose effusion on the actions of three crows. Maybe you'll find it interesting: AN ANECDOTE ABOUT THREE CROWS.

Based on an observation of animal behavior, you effectively point out a human foible. I like the natural way you handle this. After all, there is no absolute distinction between human nature and animal-like characteristics.

Ha ha. 'He took off while yelling 'caw caw caw.' ' 'took off' could mean, 'flew', 'ran', 'walked', 'jumped', 'crawled' etc. HOW do I KNOW WHICH poem character 'took off'? ? The Raven? The Stone-thrower? : ) bri

Rajan, I give 4 stars. But IF I were the poet here, I'd probably try some rhyming, and I'd break it into at least 2 stanzas/sections, not necessarily with equal numbers of lines.

line 2: I wonder if the 'minaret' is 'white' due to the raven(s) on its roof. line 10: Again I see a resemblance of the bird to me: ' ntelligent and smart', though intelligence may just be smartness, but to a hight magnitude of smartness?