! ! ! Reach! ! ! Poem by Nikunj Sharma
! ! ! Reach! ! !
See
her smile;
watch
her think;
chin resting
on palm;
Spark
the flame
in her eye.
The stars tonight
are dwarfed.
I touch,
burn,
hold her;
close to me.
who says;
you
cant touch
stars?
p.s. A waltz wave poem, written under guidance of Ms. Karin Anderson.
You have reached your peak with this wonderful Waltz Wave poem Nikunj. Thank you for mentioning me, but you are such a willing writer with vivid ideas. When one writes a Waltz Wave sometimes it feels like a lot of work for so few syllables, but you will find other readers will adore it. So now you have another feather in your cap. Top Marks....love Karin
'the stars tonight are dwarfed'...'you says you can't touch stars'.....wow, i love these lines...beautiful poem Nikunj! .......Karin would be proud...
Hello Nikunj. I am not acquainted with all the different styles of poetry but I did enjoy this one very much. '10! ' for you my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Its a wonderful one. I notice there is change in the style of u r write but i like this style. good one.
yeah, stars can be touched...whoever said that can't be? it's ur turn now to tell me what a ' waltz wave poem ' is all about!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 12:20:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
lovely..quiet a difficult form..you have done it beautifully with a wonderful coach...it has come out so naturally..and with a wonderful concept