Reaction! Poem by wardha jawdat
Reaction!
moments
when words seem
ineffective,
insipid,
impotent......
all that you
really want to do is:
fling your Hurt
arms flailing,
legs kicking
at its
cause.
editted after some very constructive and insightful critique from an esteemed peer....in the hope that it 'flows' better now...
hey wardha, i read your comments on my page thanks for them, ..but more importently i just read your poems, . they are good...really, , i mean there is freshness and creativity beautifully blended...
more physical than oral...this reaction is...good and effective...beautiful short write with a cute message inside...10
Very succinctly; and without any embellishment, cauterizing incidence of disproportion has been expressed when acerbic vine of feelings clearly overtops the receiving vessel of expression- yes then you wrestle, struggle with silence
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 5:06:35 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A nice poem, nice composition and rich with inner connotation.