Reality Poem by Loyd C Taylor Sr

Reality

Rating: 5.0


It was just a glance… then it turned into a stare,
For who was that aged creature standing there?
The eyes were full of red with rings like half quarters,
Thin lifeless hair, double chin, slumping shoulders.
Ancient, worn, weathered from living and days spent,
My skin crawled as up my back cold chills it sent.
I mused… “Who was this old person looking at me? ”
The reflection of one I had come to be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 06 June 2008

A very startling discovery that happens a lot I'm sure. Well put! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Marvin Brato 06 June 2008

Bravo! Very candid write ... to face reality as it come is the real thing that man faces in life! Getting old gracefully does not hurt! A 10.

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Jurietta Duraan 06 June 2008

Excellent poem with a nice surprising end! Anyway, I'm sure it is not as bad as THAT, Metusalem!

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