Realms Of Another Spirituality Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Realms Of Another Spirituality

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Palm trees gathered together in clusters, holding tightly
to the fruit of their essence, coconuts growing up high,
just below their branches, forming circular sights to us
below.

Filling themselves somehow with the milk of their interior
essence, unbeknownst to we humans, yet when taken from their
safety above, we humans hack and cut them open.

Just wanting to taste the fruits of nourishment, an absolute
perfection coming from within interior reaches of another
spirituality that we know absolutely nothing about.

Wednesday, May 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Was inspired and amazed at seeing coconuts in India! Got all excited at seeing them, for the last time I had seen a coconut in a palm tree was when I was five years old in Miami, Florida! Great and thrilling memory for me, just kept looking up at them!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 04 May 2016

May I take liberty of reproducing a stanza from my poem about the wonderful qualities of coconut here under: - Solace could be found from sip through straw When ambrosia from raw coconut you draw, That can make you in scorching summer calm Standing beneath meager shadow of a palm. Regards. Ratnakar Mandlik

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 May 2016

Nature through it's wonderful and amazing manifestations along with their unique intricacies presents a number of spiritual conceptions with elaboration. Thanks for sharing this beautifully crafted meaningful and thought provoking poem.10 points.

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