Dr.Balnarayana Bandam

Gold Star - 7,382 Points (10th August 1946 / Uppununthala/Achampet/tq/india)

Reciprocation - Poem by Dr.Balnarayana Bandam

work doing is a human
part, worth measure is divine sort,
make good, and claim worthy

Topic(s) of this poem: living

Form: Haiku


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Human-designed for assigned work
suitablework returns desirable returns
do good, and get worthy

Comments about Reciprocation by Dr.Balnarayana Bandam

  • Prabir Gayen (2/21/2019 12:17:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem dear poet..thanks......////
    Well penned....10+++++++++
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  • Indira Renganathan (6/30/2018 12:43:00 AM)

    Very thought provoking...as Robert has said your note is another poem....thank you (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (6/21/2018 11:53:00 AM)

    An insightful haiku elegantly brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing Balnarayana. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/20/2018 4:44:00 AM)

    Dear Poet
    A Haiku consists of 3 lines and 17 syllables. = 5 + 7 + 5

    but you've composed = 7 + 8 + 6

    sorry
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/9/2018 6:32:00 AM)

    A beautiful haiku on living life has been duly presented. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/9/2018 6:30:00 AM)

    A beautiful haiku on living life duly presented. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Robert Murray Smith (6/9/2018 4:27:00 AM)

    Your note should be the poem. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 9, 2018



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