Down on this earth
I'm a but a ghost,
A ghost of my former self
A ghost of my inner being
exploding into the outer world.
Like a ghost of my past
little do I know
how to return to the person
That I used to be.
Nor do Irecognize
the new me at all,
It's scary
frightful for me
to change so much.
In such a short time
Every one around me-
think that I'm sad
My friends don't know
how to handle me.
But how to know
I don't know
What am I?
and who am I?
An insightful introspection well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Monalisa.
Thank you sir for your great remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged.
Nor do Irecognize the new me at all, It's scary frightful for me to change so much. A debut yet powerul poem, so introspecting, so revealing. Thanks Monalisa for the lovely sharing. 10++++++
I don't know What am I? and who am I? a ghost of the past? ? ? this birth is unique and very important and God-given gift...... you proceed from God and go into God after death..... your identity is in God..... than k you for this poem which made me think...... tony
A debut yet powerul poem, so introspecting, so revealing. Thanks Monalisa for the lovely sharing. 10++++++
In such a short time Every one around me- think that I'm sad My friends don't know how to handle me. Your inner conditions so well explained. 10
Like a ghost of my past little do I know how to return to the person That I used to be. Lovely poem shared.
It's scary frightful for me to change so much. A debut yet powerul poem, so introspecting, so revealing. Thanks Monalisa for the lovely sharing. 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Returning to the previous state is difficult but not impossible A beautiful poem
Thank you my respected sir for your great remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged. Monalisa