Friday, November 19, 2010


Rating: 5.0
I was the one
who never loved to live
life so long
and lonely lamenting besides
the lake of
my green hamlet
not too near to that empoisoned
land that licks its lips
and shows the redness of its blood
to scare away the flies from daily heaps.
I tried to break free
from that web of greenery
and the bars of those tall pines.
I wheeled down,
I fled…
I fell on the heaps.
My ears buzz.
I am now free from that
monotonous Green.
(Even free from every colour.)
I saw no colours until
My veins coloured me…
Into red!
Javaid Anwar
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 December 2012
What web of greenery did u mean here? A poem dat intrigues me. Gud job with d expressive talent.
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Romeo Della Valle 29 June 2011
Definitely Poetry runs on your veins. Your words give you away with this well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Thanks for sharing and keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...
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you have the talent of describing vividly every picture and scene we see in your words-write more of them.
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 21 March 2011
you make us wonder and ponder on your poem, nice and catchy
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Abhay Vignesh L 03 March 2011
You definitely have an aptitude for poetry as this poem shows.Keep writing.Waiting to read more of your poetry
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Amina Kamran 22 November 2010
Red and green form a beautiful contrast, a vast concept nicely expressed
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Julius Lenjatin 22 November 2010
We create many boundaries of no-go zones to ourselves untill we realize it is not neccessary. But there is no such a pleasure than breaking these boundaries and in lieu finding that FREEDOM. Nice work. I salute you sir.
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