Reflection Helps Poem by Aufie Zophy

Reflection Helps

Rating: 5.0


There are a thousand paths in front of me
But I am sure and declare here solemnly
That one of them is always looking a bit brighter
Along that way, burdens seem to be a bit lighter

But even on that brighter path we tend to meet a split
Choosing left or right, we are never so sure of it,
That is when the time has come to withdraw of all the buzz
A small reflection in nature and God will show the way to us.

Friday, July 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,reflection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 24 July 2019

Beautiful 400th remarks! loved it... The feeling and thoughts blend well to honor your 400th pieces here...Life always demand us a decision...constantly...and it sometimes confusing...God makes nature as you said to give inspiration...yes it does...love the way you tell.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 July 2019

It is easy to choose between one so bright and the other dark; but harder when it comes to choosing between the two bight paths, and a little reflection does help. Well said.

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Hans Vr 19 July 2019

My number 400! . Perhaps nothing to be too proud after ten years being a member of this website. But every poem I posted here, is still dear me; it are like my babies, coming from the deepest of core. I hope you enjoy this one and all the others too :)

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