Q..... World Peace Poem by Aufie Zophy

Q..... World Peace

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How many of us do sincerely pray for world peace
How many just think it is an illusion
If we go on not praying for world peace
If we go on thinking it is an illusion
Just an illusion it may remain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sreekala Sukumaran 01 July 2010

World peace should come true and not remain as a dream...Small but expressed so well... Thanks for sharing...10++

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So true! Action speaks louder than words. A little poem with impact! ; D Read my, Tapestry Garden, you might enjoy.

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If we go on thinking it is an illusion Just an illusion it may remain... ya inactiveness is mother of all the evils...it will remain as illusion otherwise.. nicely done.....10

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Malaya Roses 08 July 2010

Since we are living on power, status and money-talking society; nobody will sincerely wish or hope better situation & condition for others. What they know is to make their position better and permit them to be more evil and hold on that. Destruction and disaster is the main package of war and it is only can be felt by people who facing the pain of war. They will pray for safety and security but others just can't walk the talk. Proposed action is only paper-talking on luxury & extravagant ceremony and war victims remain the same. Nobody willing to act unless they gain something and hidden agenda will cause pray become curse and war getting worse. Good smack to the un-sincere community.

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Riekairu Calo 25 August 2010

true, , , , , , it's really hard to get the world peace but it is possible to get...

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Aijaz Asif 18 December 2015

It's a dreamers dream...short and very meaningful write, indeed it depends on us how we see it, as of illusion or reality... And thanks for like and such inspiring comment on my poem World Peace? ? ? :)

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Ken E Hall 01 June 2013

Good to bring it to the forefront world peace which has been unknown since time began, but even in our own backyard just tell another driver he's doing something wrong and he may hit you with a baseball bat...regards

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Lenore Lee 22 November 2011

So true. We must all want and try for world peace in order for it to become more then an illusion.

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Rekha Mandagere 18 July 2011

If nobody comes forward it is OK but a conscious being should feel for it. Undoubtedly, it is the need of the day. Nice truth is glorified in a few lines.

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Eric Cockrell 22 June 2011

amen! and the best prayers comes when peoples of all nations join hands and hearts and proclaim, 'enough is enough'! we are, after all, one family. like this poem a lot!

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