The sweet smell of success
success was here to stay
the sweet fragrance of friendliness
friendliness was here to stay
the ardent cherish of love
love was here to stay
meant to smell here with thee
meant to enjoy fragrance here with thee
meant to cherish love here with thee
why-oh-why has love flown away?
love has flown away because of the killing feel
love must be cherished tenderly
softly sensuously in a sensitive way
love shall not elope in solitude
love shall stay as a poem
in joint love the most touching way
love is here to stay beyond
constantly, perpetually
emotive, impressive, attentive
caring, most loving, tenderest
darling, this poem is not meant to impress
but my heart body and soul are my zest
my zest is constantly around
The Summing Up:
my love will stay here beyond
only for thee
perpetually
in poetry
may God Bless thee abundantly....
Anno Domini Saturday the 29th of December 2018
@ 16.39 hrs. P.M. West-European Time
We inhale sweet fragrance of success as well as sweet smell of success in this 2018 and we expect to get more fragrance in coming 2019.By God's blessings we shall cherish love very nicely and tenderly. This excellently written poem will definitely impress many readers. An excellently penned poem is beautifully penned. This deserves full 100/100 marks.
Thank you so very much for your amazing full 100/100 marks. WOW!
Thank you so much Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. From the depth of my being, I thank you so very much for all the loveliest and most beautiful feedback, comments and compliments given with a most patient attitude and a true honest pen, my gratefulness knows no bounds. God´s Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family.
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I would like to translate this poem
why-oh-why has love flown away? yes, this is the fact; we love, we honor, we caress, all these emotional activities are time concerned, time will pass gradually these emotions will wither away, these psychological terms are generally touching and touched, they touch our emotion in deep, we are overwhelmed, tensed, socked, thus suddenly some drops of tears roll down our cheeks, ..... one day our eyes also will lose tears, ..... what more? we will die,
Indeed, dear poet, you are absolutely right. Thank you for your valuable feedback and worthy comments. God´s Blessings.