Reflections On Serenity Poem by Rani Turton

Reflections On Serenity

Rating: 5.0


From where did I come and from this point
What do I become and where do I go to?
My mind becomes a jumble of whats and whys and wheres.

I watch the river, flowing. Sometimes forceful
And at other times, tranquil. I watch the day
And the night. I am one with the water, sky and earth.

Sometimes, pause and listen to earth's heartbeat.
Still your mind, and still your feet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 23 October 2009

This is so peaceful, Rani. Especially that line, about pausing to listen to the earth's heartbeat. Just lovely.

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Ranjit Ravindran 03 November 2009

A lovely poem.. Liked these lines the most. ........................................................................................... My mind becomes a jumble of whats and whys and wheres. ........................................................................................... Sometimes, pause and listen to earth's heartbeat. ...........................................................................................

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Shanta Majumder 25 October 2009

Sometimes, pause and listen to earth's heartbeat. Still your mind, and still your feet. So truly it is suggested....liked your thought.....10

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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2009

you go poetically phiosophic there Rani...much truth inside...thanks...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 October 2009

such stillness and peace as you read the last two lines...beautiful

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Sandra Fowler 23 October 2009

All poets worthy of the name are at one with water, sky and the earth. Lovely write... Always your friend, Sandra

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