Nirup Ranade

Rookie (15-08-1984 / Hubli karntaka india)

Remembering You My Love - Poem by Nirup Ranade

At night I see my phone
Waiting for the ringing tone

I imagine my love with a lovely smile
Who is away from me miles n miles

When u were in my arms
I would see your face with lovely charms

I am not a poet but still want to write
Because I am sitting here alone very quiet

We used to speak everyday for hours
Now I feel I am behind the bars

I know compromises to be made are five
But what’s the hell going in my life

Peeping into my past
I feel very lost

Hope the old days come back soon
It wills be like a life in moon

At night I see my phone
Waiting for the ringing tone

Many more things appear in my mind
I pray to god to be kind.


Comments about Remembering You My Love by Nirup Ranade

  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (10/15/2008 2:15:00 AM)

    great write/rhymes..narrated well..

    Ency Bearis
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  • Seema Aarella (10/15/2008 1:47:00 AM)

    Longing of the parted lover...expressed with depth and feel of new age, waiting for the electromagnetic waves that carry her tender voice! ! ! ! ! ! !
    good write!
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  • Christina WeinkeChristina Weinke (10/14/2008 11:55:00 AM)

    its lovely i would always remember it
    christina
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  • Rishi Menon (10/14/2008 11:24:00 AM)

    Honest and Simple Poem. Straight from the heart. Very original.
    Keep up the good work.

    Ash (Rishi's Dad) .
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  • Lynda Robson (10/14/2008 11:09:00 AM)

    Nice poem, Nirup, seems like you've got it bad, well done
    Lynda x
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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/14/2008 7:13:00 AM)

    hmmm all the things we do when we are in love.....good luck with it...neat (Report)Reply

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  • Arhoz Anvi (10/14/2008 6:12:00 AM)

    nice nice nice

    Arhozie
    strawberry flavors
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  • Karima Astrid PKarima Astrid P (10/14/2008 5:33:00 AM)

    Nice Poetry..nice expression (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 14, 2008



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