Remove Her Necklace Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Remove Her Necklace

Rating: 4.3


City Park and a path of flowers at dusk,
The dream-inducing night;
I’m in love, I’m in love
With her Christmas heart
And wait for her to meet me
A quarter past midnight.

In a primitive motel,
We’ll rest from the highway,
I’ll remove her necklace
And kiss the nape of her neck;
I’ll remove her glasses
And kiss her delicate eyes
Of inner vision,

She is all I desire to see.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 12 March 2008

Wanted more description. Doesn't satisfy the reader, sweetheart. Great opening, to a possible narrative - love, sjg xx

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Alex Watt 03 March 2008

'her christmas heart..a quater past midnight' it is the unexplained that i like about this poem

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