Rendered Incompetent (A Tanka) Poem by asma bahrainwala
Rendered Incompetent (A Tanka)
I am exhausted
Thoughts no longer yield to me
Language disobeys
Ideas turn their back on me
Cadence mocks incompetence.
7th October 2006
luv this one too! ! ! Ive no idea what a tanka is - but i seem to like them. al.
Superb Asma! I can relate to the sentiment of this wonderful Tanka. Love the way you have personified thoughts, language and ideas. Justine
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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all said in little loved it! cheers! hema