Beach (A Tanka) Poem by asma bahrainwala

Beach (A Tanka)

Rating: 5.0


Pebbles on the beach
Pierce through our heels as we walk
A mild price to pay
For the damage we subject
It to by littering waste.






18th October 2006
7.14 pm

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shivapriya Surve 19 November 2006

Wow! That's so original and earnest! What a thought Asma!

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Preeti - is here! 18 October 2006

This is like a flash realisation. Really liked it Asma. Preets

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niggaboy 14 January 2018

this poem is gay and very bad you people have no sense of taste

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

A short and cute composition.10 with love.

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Melvina Germain 25 August 2007

A small poem with a huge meaning, we must clean up our act and protect our environment. Well said Asma, I love when poets show concern about our precious environment, Thankyou Asma.--Melvina--

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Peter A. Crowther 16 December 2006

Neatly encapsulates the truth that we will have to pay for the damage we inflict on our beautiful planet

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Onida 22 November 2006

A very right and real fact, all captured so beautifully! ! yours, Nida

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