Tiku akp


Rescue - Poem by Tiku akp

Don't talk to me in silence
I feel unkind
To stand before the stream
And beg for its voice to know
What is in your mind

Don't flicker your eyelids and
Create a spark
I have to look for a glowworm
To understand their beauty
As it comes out in dark

Don't spread your hair like a
Thick shroud
To know what soothing essence
It hides in its depth like rain
I have to watch a cloud

Please don't throw the magic
Of your sidelong glance
I watch the placid horizon to
Bath in the love it bears as if
Fallen into a divine trance

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Rescue by Tiku akp

  • Annette Aitken (8/14/2016 3:56:00 PM)

    You do have a way with your romantic words...nicely done.

    Annette
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  • Nilima Deb (8/14/2016 7:02:00 AM)

    Don't talk to me in silence
    I feel unkind
    To stand before the stream
    And beg for its voice to know
    What is in your mind......

    loved the uniqueness of the romantic essence flowing on the magic word of love stream. awesome penned.
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    Anil Kumar Panda(8/14/2016 11:13:00 AM)

    Thanks Nilima! ! I am glad you liked it.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/13/2016 4:12:00 PM)

    Falling in Divine trace in love is interesting definitely. This is entirely romantic sharing that has humor and metaphor. Amazing sharing...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (8/13/2016 3:01:00 AM)

    Quite romantic and aptly used metaphoric phrases makes it beautiful too. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda(8/13/2016 6:54:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for reading and beautiful comment. Regards.

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  • Rajnish Manga (8/13/2016 2:56:00 AM)

    Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem about the beauty of a lady love has been expressed in a classical poetic style. Loved reading this marvelous piece of poetry. (Report)Reply

    Anil Kumar Panda(8/13/2016 6:55:00 AM)

    Thanks. I am glad you liked it. Appreciated.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 13, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 13, 2016


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