Reveal your mind please
Telescope discovers now
Even Milky Way;
But is there any scope how
To find your love on my way
(Syllables: 5-7-5-7-7)
Beautiful love poem nicely put together. A perceptive write that resonates with literally conviction.
Ohh sensational and romantic in a brill way! Kudos! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history. I have received comments for it in my inbox though they don't show up under my poem yet.
A good question we keep asking ourselves often. Wish we had such instrument to find love. New thought. Compliments.10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A lovely Tanka on love.......10